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 ## Introduction
 
-I felt a need for minimalism and was really uneasy at the thought of 11 requests totalling about 750KB of minified files just to display a home page without any images, all that because of the docsy theme I went with when I [switched to hugo]({{< relref "/blog/miscellaneous/switching-to-hugo" >}}) two years ago.
+I felt a need for minimalism. I felt uneasy at the thought of 11 requests totalling about 750KB of minified files just to display a home page without any images, all that because of the docsy theme I went with when I [switched to hugo]({{< relref "/blog/miscellaneous/switching-to-hugo" >}}) two years ago.
 
-I am not complaining about the theme which served me well when I needed to switch and was so focused on manually importing 10 years worth of wiki articles, but this uneasiness prevented me from updating this blog as often as I wanted. I was a bit ashamed about how heavy it was.
+I am not complaining about the theme which served me well when I needed to switch and was so focused on manually importing 10 years worth of wiki articles, but this uneasiness prevented me from updating this blog as often as I wanted. I was a bit ashamed about how heavy it was, and in some way prevented me from adding content to this website.
 
 ## Learning CSS and hugo templating
 
-Yeah, that's how it went for about a week's worth of time taken here and there : plain old learning and experimenting! I learned myself some css and basic hugo templating to rebuild this website's design from the ground up and squeeze down to a home page fetching only three requests weighing a little less than 5KB total. One could easily argue that the visual result is a little more austere but I like it.
+I searched the existing hugo themes without finding something light enough to satisfy me, so I did the next logical thing : search how to write my own theme, what it entails and try to estimate how long it is going to take me. There are basically three things to get a grasp on on :
+  - hugo templating and internals
+  - some html
+  - some css
 
-I had severe misconceptions dating from about 10-15 years ago when I did some html and css manually for the first time. Even though I will never consider myself a web developer I am glad I pushed though these misconceptions and rediscovered these technologies with a fresh eye. Css really is not that hard nowadays, there is no longer a need for weird html tricks to ensure compatibility everywhere... the browser wars with internet explorer are far far behind us and that is a good thing.
+So that's how it went for about a week's worth of time taken here and there : plain old learning and experimenting! I learned myself some css and basic hugo templating to rebuild this website's design from the ground up and squeeze the home page down to only three requests weighing a little less than 5KB total. One could easily argue that the visual result is a little more austere but still like it. It's my own ugly baby know!
 
-I hesitated with several lightweight css frameworks and tried some, none left me satisfied. These certainly have their place when working in teams on big projects but they all left me puzzled. I finally went with the idea of doing it by hand with just a few classes here and there, almost everything simply attached to html tags which by the way are so much more expressive than I expected! When reading the framework documentations there were either layers of divs everywhere or dozens of classes on every element, but it is all unnecessary to get a working website. There are tags like header, footer, main, article, aside etc that have real meaning, no need for div div div div div or class="this that also-that"!
+I have to admit that I had severe misconceptions dating from about 10-15 years ago when I first did some html and css manually. The web was a very different place at that time, and even though I will never consider myself a web developer with how little I learned I am glad I pushed though these misconceptions and rediscovered these technologies with a fresh eye. Css really is not that hard nowadays and there is no longer a need for weird html tricks to ensure compatibility everywhere... the browser wars with internet explorer are far far behind us and that is a good thing.
+
+I hesitated with several of the lightest css frameworks and tried some, but none left me satisfied. These certainly have their place when working in teams on big projects but they were still too weird and I did not like using any of those (I tried purecss, bulma, foundation and skeleton). I finally went with the idea of doing it all by hand with just a few classes here and there, almost everything simply attached to html tags. I was so surprised when I read all the html elements that exist today which are so much more expressive than I expected! When reading the framework documentations there were either layers of divs everywhere or dozens of classes on every element, but it just seem so unnecessary to get a working website. There are tags like header, footer, main, article, aside etc that have real meaning, no need for div div div div div or class="this that also-that"!
 
 ## Afterthoughts
 
@@ -26,8 +31,7 @@ My pre-requisites for this blog were :
   - a decent look on mobile, similar than on desktop
   - rss feeds
   - very light
-  - link pagination
 
-I added tags to all articles since I lost the search feature, but it was worthwhile to get rid of all the javascript on the website. I might work something out later to get a search feature, but it is not a heavy price to achieve this degree of minimalism.
+I added tags to all articles since I lost the search feature, but it was worthwhile to get rid of all the javascript on the website. I might work something out later to get a search feature, but in the meantime losing it is not a heavy price to achieve this degree of minimalism.
 
 You can check the repository [here](https://git.adyxax.org/adyxax/www), so light, so simple... I love it!